Which of the following is the correct order for the stages of Gaga’s career?
a. She appeared in a music festival in Chicago b. She won the award—the best female c. She decided to quit school d. She created a show with another artist e. She was signed by a record company f. Her success has become a university course
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右 边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正: 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:原行没有错的不要改。 Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_________ far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful 67_________ if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________ looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________ a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study 70_________ better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________ photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________ and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but 73_________ unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________ little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________ 66.happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
1.羡慕高一学生及缘由; 2.自己感到遗憾的方面; 3.课改对学生的益处; 4.给高一学生的建议; 5.学校在课改中应注意之处。 注意: 1.次数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,并不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节,使行文流畅。3.参考词汇:the Curriculum Reform课改 Dear Editor, I am Li Ping, a senior three student in our school. Recently I have learned that the Curriculum Reform is being carried out in Senior One of our school, Wish the Curriculum Reform a success! Yours sincerely, Li Ping
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书面表达评分说明 一、各档次语言要点和语言质量配分参考标准 档次 要点数 要点分 质量分 语言要点表达情况划档根据 第五档 5 21-25 8-10 语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚 第四档 4 16-20 6-8 语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚 第三档 3 11-15 4-6 语言有一些错误,尚能表达 第二档 2 6-10 2-4 语言错误很多,影响表达 第一档 1 0-5 0-2 只能写出与要求内容无关的一些单词 说明:因目前缺乏近年高考英语学科书面表达评分标准,故本次二诊暂时采用“各档次语言要点分+语言质量分”评分办法。评分是首先打出要点分、再根据其语言质量决定各档次对应的加分。 二、语言要点认定及给分参考标准 1.表示羡慕高一学生,2分(含senior one, student(s), admire, envy, be jealous of等关键词);说明羡慕理由(至少一条)3分; 2.表示了遗憾,2分(含regret/pity等关键词);说明了感到遗憾的缘由,3分; 3.课改对学生的益处(至少一个),2分(含benefit/beneficial for/do good to…等关键词);阐述了理由,3分; 4.对高一学生提出具体建议(至少一个),5分;(含advise/advice,suggest/suggestion等关键词) 5.提出了学校在课改中具体应该注意或改进的地方5分;(含what to do等关键词) 三 扣分参考标准 1.起表达未能达成正确句意的,不给分,如:写出了主语或谓语等关键词,但未能达成符合要点、意义正确的句子。 2.句子结构完整、但关键点出现错误或漏掉部分关键词的,扣半个要点分,如主谓一致错误,关键词拼写错误(如主语、关键性名词等),或谓语动词时态/语态错误等; 3.凡使用铅笔答题或答题中使用了涂改液的,一律不给分; 4.凡多次出现非关键性单词拼写错误或其他同类错误的,原则上每4处扣1分; 5.文章内容要点全面,但写出了一些多余内容(连接词或过渡词句不在此列),原则上不扣分; 6.凡书写超出规定的答题区域,全卷不给分; 7.书写潦草凌乱,但基本不影响阅卷的,酌情扣卷面分1-2分。 四 One possible version Dear Eidtor, I am Li Ping, a senior three student in our school. Recently, I have learned that the Curriculum Reform is being carried out in Senior One of our school, and I can’t help admiring those lucky students, for they’ve got the chance to choose to study what they like. But to my regret, I had no choice but to learn what was provided by the school when I was in Senior One. Even so, I still feel that the Curriculum Reform will certainly benefit students’ future development in a long term. From this aspect, I strongly advise them to make good use of this opportunity to develop themselves. Meanwhile, I also hope that the school can find a proper balance between the development of students’ personal interest and their performance in the exam. (104 words) Wish the Curriculum Reform a success! Yours sincerely, Li Ping