Dear Mary I saw your name in the newspaper, you asked for penfriends in China. I would like to be your penfriend. I am a thirteen- year- old boy. I live in Nanjing. I am a student at No.1 Secondary School. We study Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, PE and some other subjects. My favorite subjects are Maths and PE. I like playing the guitar, collecting stamps and taking photos. I like summer best because my favourite sport is swimming. My family is not big. My grandfather, my father, my mother, and I live a happy life here. My father is an engineer, my mother is a doctor. My grandfather was a policeman and now he is retired(退休). We live in an old house. Near our house, there is a beautiful park. Our family often take a walk in the park after supper. I would like to know something about you and the UK. Please write to me soon. My e-mail address is [email protected] fax and telephone number is 86-25-82011853. Yu Run Yu Run’s profile
Name
Yu Run
Age
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Telephone and fax number
86-25-82011853
__ of the school
No.1Secondary School
__ subjects
Maths and P.E.
Hobbies
Playing the guitar , __ stamps and taking photos
Favourite sport
I like swimming __
Favourite season
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Family __
There are __ people in the family. Grandfather, father, and mother who works in a __.
What must you do when you get a present for your birthday? You have to sit down and w __ a thank-note. The words“thank you” are very important. We have to use them very o __ We say them when someone gives us a drink, h __ us to pick up things, or lends us a book. Another i __ word is “please”. Many people forget to use it. It is not polite to ask someone to do something without s __ “please”. We have to use it w __ we ask for something, too. It may be a book or a pencil, more rice or help. We have to l __ to say “sorry”, too. If we hurt (伤害)someone, we’ll have to go up to say “we’re s __ ”. When we forget something, we will a __ say “sorry”. These three words are easy b __ important. Our children must learn to use them. They are pleasing(令人高兴的) words to use in any language(语言).
The name of our school is Friendship secondary school. Teachers and students here are all very friendly and helpful. There’s a new shopping mall behind our school and a bus stop in front of it, beside it is a restaurant serving Sichuan dishes.The shopping mall is very big. We can buy different kinds of things in it.After school,we often do some shopping there. Sometimes we buy snacks,clothes and stationery.We can have Sichuan food in the restaurant.It’s hot,but I’m sure you’ll like it.our school life is very colourful. In a word ,it’s a good place to live and study, I think you will like it very much. 评分标准: 第五档:(20-18分)能写明全部要点,语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误,行文流畅,表达清楚。 第四档:(17-15分)能写明大部分要点,语言有一些错误(句子结构或动词时态错误1-2处),但行文基本流畅,表达基本清楚。 第三档:(14-12分)能写明一些要点,语言错误较多(句子结构或动词时态错误3-4处),但意思基本连贯,表达基本清楚。 第二档:(11-9分)能写出少数要点,语言错误多,意思不连贯,影响意思表达。 第一档:(8-0分)只能写出若干单词,无可读的句子。